Katy, can you sing this?

Katy, this is about my 10th vocal take in two days. I like the way this song is coming out,, but my voice instrument isn’t a good fit. It needs you! I messaged you more deets on fb messenger.

To es mas caliente que el sol 
Wherever it is you may go
Five minutes after you leave all the air is cold
Shoulders shiver like a fault runs through
Lips turn from red to blue
And our words turn to smoke as they follow for you
Come back, come back to us
Come back, come and melt us
Come back, come back Mas Caliente Que El Sol
As the night was coming to an end
I wanted to be more than friends of friends
You left your hand on my hand as you said goodbye
So much has happened between now and then
The earth froze and a garden bloomed again
Yet still I fall asleep and see your light dark eyes
To es mas caliente que el sol
Wherever it is you may go
Five minutes after you leave all the air is cold
Shoulders shiver like a fault runs through
Lips turn from red to blue
And our words turn to smoke as they follow for you
Come back, come back to us
Come back, come and melt us
Come back, come back Mas Caliente Que El Sol
Tu es mas caliente que el sol
Wherever it is you may go
Five minutes after you leave all the air is cold.